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Stupid Mud Man

Summary: Trouble Kelp was mad. That morning Foaly had shown him a video of last weeks mission to Fowl’s house to […]

Chapters: 1 2 3 4

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Trouble Kelp was mad. That morning Foaly had shown him a video of last weeks mission to Fowl’s house to interogate him about the Unicorn incedent. After the questioning,however,he and Holly had gone into another room. This was where Foaly had zoomed in. As Foaly laughed his head off,Trouble had stared in horror. Holly and that stupid mud man were kissing. And Fowl knew that Trouble had liked Holly since their days in the acadamy. He,Trouble Kelp, was going to commit murder.He was going to kill Artemis Fowl.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4

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  1. Beckett Simpleton February 16th, 2010 at 9:25 pm 1

    I’m not sure wether I enjoyed that or not or wether it was good or bad… The chapters where short but you got away with it well. A rare talent. And there were some grammer mistakes.

    After ‘I’m going to marry Artemis’ you need a new paragraph and there was one by the bit about the monkey bars but I can’t remember it right now… And If i change chapters I’ll lose my comment.

    I gotta say, I laughed. It was brief but that was only an issue at the very begining. After that it seemed okay. Are you going to continue it? I think you should. And ARTEMIS WAS SHOT!? did i read that right? Becuae if he was you didn’t put much influence on it. But all in all i’m in two minds on this one so I will rate it $ stars because it was well written and the grammar was good but it was a bit strange.

    *First Comment Dance*

  2. Okay. A few things. This was;

    1. Funny
    2. Intriguing
    3. Missing a few things.

    There were more than several grammar/punctuation/spelling errors. But this wasn’t too bad. 😉 Please update. This is interesting. 😀

  3. Thanks.I just updated.Captan Short,out

  4. jade! can i put the elmo/holly/bob/child molester story up?? PLEASE!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASSEEEEEEEE??!!! i helped you write most of it

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