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Summary: A fierce battle. A perfect war. A deadly sin. What lies in wait... in the murky depths of your very soul? A dark side: Unleashed...

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Speed

Including the Musical Stylings of WaterFlame

-Skyscraper- (techrock 3)

 

Inspired by TM.
You have an aura I havenโ€™t encountered in anyone else.

And I am proud.

Queue Music

~***~

Lights!

And the roses wilted.

Camera!

And the sand ran out.

Action!

Leaving an empty hourglass.

Lights! Camera! Action!

GO!

Neutrino?

CHECK.

Running hot?

CHECK.

Helmet?

CHECK.

And love, was obsolete.

MOVE OUT!

Fall back!

Attack!

Those were the commands she uttered.

LIGHTS!

CAMERA!

ACTION!

They attacked with a vengeance.

GO!

Neutrino?

CHECK.

Running hot?

CHECK.

Helmet?

CHECK.

 

Heads held high.

GO!

The knowledge that they would not survive….

GO!

…heavy in their hearts.

GO!

Lead, stone, lava.

Purest gold.

GO!

They are…

MOVE OUT!

The LEP.

***

His forehead streaked with sweat and the blood of a sinner.

GO!

Fatal wound…

MOVE OUT!

Damage beyond repair…

ATTACK!

His last breath,

GO!

Her name on his lips.

***

I COMMAND YOU.

PROTECT YOUR WORLD.

YOUR WAY OF LIFE!

 

Attack.

And may you live to see the morrow.

***

Rivers run red.

GO!

Magic wanes.

LIGHTS!

CAMERA!

ACTION!

The very Earth opened up.

The skies split open.

And down, rained the blood.

Millions suffering.

Millions dead.

Misery.
Death.
Decay.

Gaunt, their faces.

Brutal march.

Punish those who dare.

To dare.

To touch you.

GO!

Your child.

Your family.

Your home.

PUNISH.

GO!

***

She cradled his head tenderly.

GO!

Lifeless.

GO!

A shadow…

I COMMAND YOU!

Of his former self.

GONE.

TO FIGHT!

***

Mountains crumbled.

Seas erupted.

Fiery anger.

The kiss of Death. Destruction. Demolition.

The Gods unappeased.

GO!

Bloody murder.
Bloody hands.
Bloody soul.

TAKE BACK WHAT WAS RIGHTFULLY YOURS.

Bloody murder.
Bloody hands.
Bloody soul.

GO!

Lights!

Camera!

Action!

Attack.

And the rivers ran red.
And the sky split open.
The heavens blinking down upon the clashing species.
And finally, there was lightning.

 

Speed of light.

Blood spilled,

Species once,

No more.

And the animals, and the plants, and the seas, and the quakes, and the sands….

They took over the Earth.

Wrapping it,

In a cocoon of wild force.

Healing it.

And so, the vines and mice took over our home.

Attack.

To reclaim what was lost.

 

 

Speed. Of. Light.

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11 responses to “Speed.” Join in!

  1. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Omg omg omg! I did 4 stars instead of 5! Ahhh!!!! So. So. Sorry.

    Onto the review.

    Incredible. Just…incredible.

    I’m finished.

  2. I agree incredible as it can be and more! Fowlie, now you see why I look up to your poems? Just wow… I have to give this 5/T(tacos!!!). I would say that this is your best so far. Omg the Faires took over, I’m dead (Hehe and so is TM.)! No wait I take the 5 tacos back and give it 100/T.

    I need more of this!!!

  3. This was really good!

    5/s

    Come on Ju! You have to be at least a bit constructive! ~Fowlie

  4. ArtfullyInsane August 12th, 2011 at 5:41 pm 4

    I’m completely and totally shocked.

    That was…perfect. There really is no other word, and even that one doesn’t seem to fit it.

    5 stars.

  5. ShatteredSparks August 12th, 2011 at 8:33 pm 5

    Wow. I am speechless. Bravo! I didn’t catch any mistakes, and like how it can be applied to Holly Arty or Holly Trouble ๐Ÿ™‚

    Wow. Just… Wow

  6. FantasyDevourer August 13th, 2011 at 3:17 am 6

    Oh…wow. That was so cool and intense. I loved it. No mistakes and…wow.

    5/s

    (Amazing)

  7. Amazing. I can just see this perfectly as maybe a little movie drabble thing, with the music playing in the background. Beautiful. That’s all I have to say.

    No mistakes.

    5 stars.

  8. I loved this. It was amazing. That’s all I can say. There is no word I can make up to describe how awesome it was. Grea-some. awe-mazing. Gna-teous. See? I can’t.

  9. Incredible! Fowlie, it was BEAUTIFUL. A work of art :3.
    Congrats on such an amazing story, and keep it up!

    ~Silver

  10. Oh, Fowleh, that was amazing! The music was a nice touch. Anyway, 5 stars!

    ~Cimerene

  11. A "Fowl" Visitor September 9th, 2011 at 5:45 pm 11

    I agree with all the above comments; beautiful. I was slightly confused, but I didn’t cacth any mistakes, so I’m good. Anyways, it was truly lovely. All in all, I give it 5 lollipops ๐Ÿ™‚

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