New World
Written on March 2nd, 2007 by xxemxxStory Details
(18 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Loading ...Holly Short was furious, “I can’t believe you! If this is what becoming a major does to a person then thank Frond I never became one.” She looked at the ex-captain….his eyes were amazing.
“We had no other option,” he replied. He looked at Holly; he thought she was beautiful.
She stepped nearer him, “There was a child in there. Do you listen to yourself?” Her face was now inches away from his
“You should have waited for back-up!”
“Is this the same Trouble I used to know? You never waited for back-up!”
“Holly….” he began before holding her face and kissed her. She couldn’t believe what was happening but she kissed him back. Foaly walked in, “OK, which one of you….” he said before seeing them and walking away.
“Elves, ” he thought, “I could have seen that one coming!”
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March 2nd, 2007 at 10:11 pm
Hey man this is basically for chapter two…
YOu shouldn’t leave us hanging like that
quote”Well yes…” Is that about holly and trouble? Or her job? Or does Foaly actually need Artemis for something?
March 2nd, 2007 at 10:12 pm
oh and for chapter one it looked like you had 3 differant POVs
March 3rd, 2007 at 12:01 am
What is “POV”?Ah poit of view I got it never mind.
March 3rd, 2007 at 7:27 am
Has it been completed? or are you continuing it on? you better be continuing!
March 3rd, 2007 at 5:11 pm
I put it in Romance and General. Would that be the correct category for this story? I’m not too sure since it’s imcomplete and I was going to put it in action but there doesn’t really seem to be much. Help???
March 3rd, 2007 at 5:19 pm
General would be the most appropriate.
March 3rd, 2007 at 5:20 pm
But would romance since there’s this thing between Holly and Trouble?
March 3rd, 2007 at 5:27 pm
It isn’t going to be the main theme
March 3rd, 2007 at 7:01 pm
oh…okay…I’ll change it
March 11th, 2007 at 6:19 pm
Holly and Trouble, I always thought they would be a cute couple. U better continue writeing
April 8th, 2007 at 7:55 pm
Nice, but slightly confusing from all the POVs
Please read my story sometime peoples okay? It’s called Minerva’s Life and it’s not quite finished. 
April 28th, 2007 at 2:07 am
Grate story
May 15th, 2007 at 4:33 pm
Sorry, you’ve got the wrong person here. I don’t have a website and I’m not dumb enough to go onto yours! Lets just say it doesn’t quite agree with my computer.
The only thing I have is a bebo page and to whoever asked me to “let them be introduced to their friends”. No chance!
May 15th, 2007 at 8:27 pm
You were right to distrust that comment. It wasn’t made a real person, it was made by a spambot. I’ve deleted it. Please ignore them if they show up in the future- somebody will come around and delete it.
May 15th, 2007 at 9:22 pm
Thanks.
June 19th, 2007 at 10:40 am
Hi!!! Excellent resource you’ve got here!!! Will definately be back!!!
December 9th, 2007 at 11:37 pm
MMK, what is a spambot?
December 9th, 2007 at 11:53 pm
yeah , same question about the spambot and GRATE story , are u going to continue?
December 10th, 2007 at 12:28 am
A spambot is a program that authomatically goes around and posts on blogs, forums, etc. Generally they advertise or try to make you buy something. You can recognize spambots because they generally are unrelated to the conversation, are really general, ask for personal info, or have links (looking over this, I see that ‘oppengamer’ is a spambot).
Beware of spambots, and NEVER click on the links they give you, or give them personal information.
December 10th, 2007 at 1:11 am
okay , and thanx
December 13th, 2007 at 6:41 pm
This is pretty good story. Is this all you’re doing? or r u continueing