Mindfreak

Written on March 25th, 2008 by The Almighty Moi

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  • Status : Incomplete
  • Category: Action
  • Author: The Almighty Moi
  • Word Count: 1862
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Chapter Two: The Warning

Everyday one of the goblins that guarded the prison would stop to talk to him. He didn’t know why and the goblin never told him. The goblins were already afraid of him and it only increased their fears when the guard was put down due to pshychological problems. Soon after they started calling him Mindfreak.

Butler was patrolling the grounds of the manor but his mind was on other things. He was worried about Artemis. Even though Artemis Sr was back Artemis still felt like a son to Butler.

“Butler.”

Butler spun around aimong his sig sauer at the man hiding in the shadows. Butler couldn’t see the man very well but he seemed to be wearing an LEP helmet.

“It is said that the security at public schools are not very efficient.” the man said.

“What are you talking about?” Butler demanded.

“Your principle could be in danger right now.”

“Danger from what?”

“Not what. Who. A fairy to be precise. But he’s in disguise.”

“Who are you?”

He hesitated before answering. “You can call me Mindfreak.” He disappeared.

Holly was in her office at her new detective agency, Diggums and Short. She was filling out some paper work from their latest case. An old gnome had lost her cat. Holly hadn’t even called Artemis to help with that one. Just as she finished her paperwork and started a game of solitaire her communicater rang.

“Hello?”

“Holly,it’s me Butler.”

“Hi Butler.”

“Something happened.”

Holly heard the urgency in Butlers voice.

“What?”

“A person visited me in the grounds of the manor. He was wearing an LEP helmet and he told me to call him Mindfreak. He said that Artemis is in danger from a fairy whos in disguise.”

“Where are you?”

“On my way to the school.”

“Ok. I’ll give Foaly a call and ask him to get me aboveground.” Holly hung up.

“What’s up?”

Holly jumped at the sound of Mulch’s voice. “Don’t sneak up on me!” she yelled.

Mulch looked concerned. “Your jumpy.” he said “What’s wrong?”

“Can’t talk” Holly said as she dialled Foaly.

“Hello this is Foaly, the most handsome and smart centaur ever. Who’s this?”

“It’s me.”

“Holly! I was just about to call you. Last night I met the most beautiful centaur ever. Her name was-”

“Foaly.” Holly interupted “I called you for a reason.”

“What?”

“Butler just called.”

“Why?”

Holly told Foaly about Mindfreak. Mulch listened in.

“Ok.” Foaly said “I’ll call ahead so you can get aboveground. Then I’ll look through the Fowl Manor camera’s and try to get a proper look at this guy”

Holly thanked Foaly and hung up. “Seeya Mulch.”

“Ok, I’ll just throw a wild party while your gone.”

“If you do, you better clean it up.”

“Whatever.”

Holly ran off, wishing she was still in the LEP so that she could have her nuetrino.

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10 Reviews for “Mindfreak”

  1. lil.arty Says:

    even thou this is really short im already hooked….u must continue with this idea

  2. FictionWizard Says:

    yes please continue

  3. iWrite Says:

    This is a very good beginning and sounds like a good story. You truly should continue.

  4. Moonlite Knight Says:

    Ohh, interesting. I can’t wait to see what happens next

  5. Kcool Says:

    Ohhh thats really good, it gets you hooked really quickley.

  6. Simetra16 Says:

    “Hello this is Foaly, the most handsome and smart centaur ever. Who’s this?”

    Lol :mrgreen: that was great.

  7. Lydia Tall Says:

    Cool story I like it. If you want I can help you delete that extra chapter at the begining. The same thing has happened to me before. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes.

  8. songfic_freak Says:

    I really like it! Please continue.

  9. The Almighty Moi Says:

    Thankyou for all the reviews ^^ Lydia Tall, I’d love if you told me how to get rid of the extra chapter.

  10. Helen Says:

    This is really nice! I hope you continue along this line. The mysterious stranger… hmm… who is he? I will go crazy is you don’t continue!!! You have to write much much more quickly!

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