Mindfreak
Written on March 25th, 2008 by The Almighty MoiStory Details
(1 votes, average: 4 out of 5)
Loading ...Chapter One: New School, Hidden Dangers.
Artemis sat in his desk on his first day at the public school his parebts were now forcing him to attend.
“Bottom, George”
“Here”
Strangely enough Artemis was actually nervous about whether or not his new classmates would accept him and what his teachers would think of him.
“Derry, Leanne”
“Here”
Artemis missed St Bartleby’s. At his new school the desks were grafitied as were the walls and strangely enough, the ceiling. The fans wobbled dangerously and several legs some of the chairs legs were bent at odd angles.
“Fowl, Artemis”
“Present”
Several students turned to get a look at the new kid. Artemis could feel their gazes upon him.
“Stuart, Bree”
“Here”
The teacher finished marking the marking the roll and the bell rang signaling the start of period one. Everyone left the room, grumbling about whatever subject they had first.
“Hey you. The new kid.” someone called out. Artemis turned around to see a girl with green eyes, brown hair and a shocking amount of freckles running towards him. She stopped in front of him panting.
“Your names Artemis right?”
“Thats correct”
“Cool name. Kinda exotic.”
“Thankyou”
“I’m Bree”
“A pleasure to meet you”
Bree frowned at him. “Why are you so formal?”
“It’s called manners”
She shrugged. “Need help finding your next class?”
Artemis didn’t need help for he had memorised the entire school layout but he allowed Bree to lead him anyway.
“Well here’s your class” she said showing, him the door. “Hey I got an idea” she grinned “Why don’t you hang out with me and my friends at break!”
Artemis forced himself not to correct her grammer and agreed to ‘hang’ with her.
As he sat down at his desk he frowned. He kept getting the feeling someone was watching him.
He watched the exchange between Artemis and the girl Bree with a scowl on his face. That girl was not to be trusted. Couldn’t Artemis see that? He would have to keep a close eye on him and make sure the girl didn’t do anything. But he had other things to do. Then he had a plan.
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March 25th, 2008 at 9:18 am
even thou this is really short im already hooked….u must continue with this idea
March 25th, 2008 at 2:49 pm
yes please continue
March 25th, 2008 at 11:56 pm
This is a very good beginning and sounds like a good story. You truly should continue.
March 28th, 2008 at 4:20 am
Ohh, interesting. I can’t wait to see what happens next
March 29th, 2008 at 10:14 am
Ohhh thats really good, it gets you hooked really quickley.
May 23rd, 2008 at 5:17 am
“Hello this is Foaly, the most handsome and smart centaur ever. Who’s this?”
Lol
that was great.
May 26th, 2008 at 5:00 am
Cool story I like it. If you want I can help you delete that extra chapter at the begining. The same thing has happened to me before. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes.
May 26th, 2008 at 7:12 pm
I really like it! Please continue.
June 18th, 2008 at 11:28 am
Thankyou for all the reviews ^^ Lydia Tall, I’d love if you told me how to get rid of the extra chapter.
June 27th, 2008 at 1:45 pm
This is really nice! I hope you continue along this line. The mysterious stranger… hmm… who is he? I will go crazy is you don’t continue!!! You have to write much much more quickly!