Mindfreak

Written on March 25th, 2008 by The Almighty Moi

Story Details

  • Status : Incomplete
  • Category: Action
  • Author: The Almighty Moi
  • Word Count: 1862
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10 Reviews for “Mindfreak”

  1. lil.arty Says:

    even thou this is really short im already hooked….u must continue with this idea

  2. FictionWizard Says:

    yes please continue

  3. iWrite Says:

    This is a very good beginning and sounds like a good story. You truly should continue.

  4. Moonlite Knight Says:

    Ohh, interesting. I can’t wait to see what happens next

  5. Kcool Says:

    Ohhh thats really good, it gets you hooked really quickley.

  6. Simetra16 Says:

    “Hello this is Foaly, the most handsome and smart centaur ever. Who’s this?”

    Lol :mrgreen: that was great.

  7. Lydia Tall Says:

    Cool story I like it. If you want I can help you delete that extra chapter at the begining. The same thing has happened to me before. There were some spelling and grammar mistakes.

  8. songfic_freak Says:

    I really like it! Please continue.

  9. The Almighty Moi Says:

    Thankyou for all the reviews ^^ Lydia Tall, I’d love if you told me how to get rid of the extra chapter.

  10. Helen Says:

    This is really nice! I hope you continue along this line. The mysterious stranger… hmm… who is he? I will go crazy is you don’t continue!!! You have to write much much more quickly!

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