Le Soleil et La Luna

Written on February 20th, 2008 by artyrox

Story Details

  • Status : Incomplete
  • Category: Action
  • Author: artyrox
  • Word Count: 3202
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Chapter 5: The Journey Begins

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13 Reviews for “Le Soleil et La Luna”

  1. mayqueen17 Says:
    February 20th, 2008 at 6:00 pm

    *FCD* This is so cool so far! ^-^ How did you come up with the kingdoms’ names? And what’s the picture look like?

  2. artyrox Says:
    February 20th, 2008 at 7:43 pm

    well I wrote a story called spirited away (shame that titles already been used) and there were two kingdoms one was called dlykasia and the other flambasia but since flambasia doesn’t work so well i used the beginning of soleil for the kingdom. glad you liked it. Oh and might be able to scan it into the computer if a fair amount of people want to see it.

  3. foalygenius Says:
    February 20th, 2008 at 8:46 pm

    I want to see it! I like your story so far, it’s very attention-grabbing. Good job, and keep writing!

  4. Olive Says:
    February 20th, 2008 at 10:40 pm

    You’ve got to scan in the picture because now I am majorly curious! Please update soon, I like it.

  5. Star Jinin Says:
    February 21st, 2008 at 12:00 am

    Hmm… there’s spelling mistakes and some of the charachters are very OCC…

  6. Olive Says:
    February 21st, 2008 at 10:27 pm

    Wow very interesting! Your descriptions are great! Update soon.

  7. mayqueen17 Says:
    February 22nd, 2008 at 3:26 am

    Remind to NOT touch princesses from and fire-type kingdoms…

  8. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    February 22nd, 2008 at 3:48 am

    Oh wow, it’s my first time reading this and the main reason I started reading was because you said Manga,I love anime and mange, I saw the Movie spirited away and Howl’s moving castle. I LOVE THEM! I also watched Card captor sakura, Inuyasha , Full metal alchemist, Friut basket, Sailor moon, Naruto, Pita ten the list will go on forever. Anyway, your very desvriptive and Olive’s right you need to scan them and show us!

  9. mayqueen17 Says:
    February 23rd, 2008 at 7:24 pm

    How did Arty do that?

  10. foalygenius Says:
    February 23rd, 2008 at 8:00 pm

    Yay! I still like it! i really like the story line and the characters! Update soon!

  11. Olive Says:
    February 23rd, 2008 at 9:15 pm

    The descriptions of the rooms were amazingly thought out, it was soooooo cool! Good job!

  12. mahi101 AF Fan Says:
    February 23rd, 2008 at 9:33 pm

    Love your describbing please keep on writting!

  13. Holly Short Says:
    August 6th, 2008 at 3:25 am

    Please update soon i love this story

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