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Fowlie’s Complex

Summary: What if Fowlie has the Atlantis Complex? She's not sure how she got it, but she knows it's time to get rid of it. And she has no idea how.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

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Chapter Five: Trapped

Fowlie gritted her teeth in frustration as she slammed into the concrete. She made only a few cracks, nothing big enough for her to escape. Her anger went over the edge as she collapsed onto the floor and began counting and muttering curses to herself.

“So, this is what insanity is truly like. Being caged inside your mind, unable to control anything you say or do.”

A wisp of silver bearing a calmer breeze than Fowlie’s own immediately helped the latter up. “Sit down,” the voice commanded. A figure mirroring her own image appeared before her. “Rhunön, pleased to meet you,” the silver wisp introduced itself. Rhunön was Fowlie’s twin, but there was something different about the way she held herself and commanded others. There was a silvery steel glint in her eye that told people to be careful when dealing with her.

Fowlie on the other hand, was exhausted from the stress of hurting and healing Dommy, and hosting her personalities. She was worn and wished only to sleep. She held herself weakly and her eyes were only a dull black. The difference between the two was astounding.

Fowlie sighed, “Thank you…” she said.

“I’m you….in a sense. I love her as much you do, even if I am your darkest side. It took…so much energy to heal her broken spirit. I just don’t…” Rhunön tried to reply, looking extremely troubled, before just going to her corner to meditate.

Chapters: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8

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  1. Woot woot! GO AC! XD update! FCD! It was a little short, though… oh well! *hands cheese string*

    Fowlie Says:

    Forge thanks you for the cheese. 😀 And, I don’t usually prolong my prologues. I promise the next update will be longer.

  2. Okay, you kind of confused me. It says Fowlie’s complex, so do you have the complex or not? it isn’t exactly mentioned, and it’s just kind of confusing. Otherwise it was good! UPDATE!

    Fowlie Says:

    Thanks for reading it. 😀 I thought it was clear that I have the Complex, because I am yelling at my alternate personalities: Veronica (the hopeless romantic lip gloss addicted flirt) and Forge (the crazy string cheese addicted ax-brandishing quick-to-anger girl). I hope you understand now. 😀 Thanks for the review. 😀

  3. Bobo Paradizo June 24th, 2011 at 4:46 am 3

    Cheese? Wow! I luv it…
    I’m a little confused over whos who, but its pretty good, anyways

    Fowlie Says:

    Hey Bobo. 😀 Thanks for the comment. Forge and Veronica are my personalities, but I will treat them as different people with different POV’s. It’s definitely less confusing this way. Okay? 😀 Really, we’re all the same person though. Right now, it’s in my POV, because I am the one thinking about the others. I know it’s confusing, but it’s going to be a fun story. Keep reading! 😀

  4. I apologize, but my chapter divider option thingy is currently not working. If one of the mods or someone could please help me out, it would be appreciated. 😀 The story will be one big post until this is fixed.

    /EDIT:/ The chapter divider thingy is now working! Enjoy the story! 😀

  5. I’m… I’m… wow…*is Domvia people!* I’m hurt and actually I am eleven… But still wow….

    Fowlie Says:

    Dommeh! Thank you for reviewing! 😀 I take it you like the story?

  6. Niiiiiiice! I nearly cried when I heard about Dommy. Awesome! An hour of sparring, sounds like me XD

    Fowlie Says:

    Yay! 😀 You guys will love the next chappie. 😀

  7. Ah, very good. Falcon approves ^^
    It wasn’t confusing to me at all…

    UPDAT(e)!

    Fowlie Says:

    Glad you liked it. I can’t believe you want an update already! Fine. *mutters* Always slaving away on a hot keyboard for you bottomless pits of fan fiction reading zombies all day…I’ll try to get one more chapter in, maybe….

  8. That’s very good! I like the way you describe things. It really paints the images well in my mind. *sigh* Poor Dom…. 🙁

    On another note, you’re a fan of Hetalia?? Woot!! I love that show!! 🙂

    Update soon, please? 🙂


    Fowlie Says:

    Aww Ann! Thanks! 😀 Yes, I love Prussia! I thought I was overdoing it with the descriptions, thanks! 😀

  9. *SPOILER ALERT! Yes Fowlie it is awesome but not the part where I’m almost dead… Where’s Grub when I need him! *don’t ask…*


    Fowlie Says:

    Dommy, you said you wouldn’t tell! Sigh….oh well. Anyway *evil grin* your wittle Grubbles is on his way! A wittle chapter fwuffyness just for yew! 😀 Hahahahaah! Muhahahaha!

  10. I take it everyone likes the story so far? XD Chapter four coming up soon. 😀

  11. Okay thats awesome and not… He he update! and Really? Wittle Grubbles?

    Fowlie Says:

    I’m a sucker for reviews. Seriously. And yes, really. Grubbie might might make an appearance in the next chapter.

  12. You guys are so lucky I’m in a good mood. Two chapters in one day? Maybe another one coming. 😀

  13. Oy! Me and Dom wrote a LOT of that! *grrr*

    Fowlie Says:

    *sniffles* You wrote a lot of chapter five, I did chapter four, six and seven. We’ve all written a lot…. *sniffles* I gave you guys credit! Dom helped a little on Four…yeah…

  14. That’s so true Mira that’s so true…

    Fowlie Says:

    *sniffles*

  15. This is AWESOME! poor Fowlie, please update soon!!!


    Fowlie Says:

    Okay. Chapter six is just for Torry! 😛 Coming right up!

  16. Hermione Fowl July 6th, 2011 at 2:35 am 16

    That was pretty confusing, but maybe I’m just stupid. I liked the prologue, apart from the first line:’All the girl wanted was some string cheese! All she wanted was string cheese!’ No matter what primary school teachers tell you, repetition is NOT COOL.
    UPDATE OR FEAR MY WRATH!!!!!

    Fowlie Says:

    *fixes first line/update (soon as I wake up tomorrow XD)* Man, it’s been such a long time since I’ve read that. I missed your threatening and commanding yet loving presence at FF. *huggles*

  17. Oh god Mary Sue alert.

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