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Empty World.

Summary: People change. From good to bad, bad to good. Wealth can change someone, Love can change someone. I hate him; […]

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People change. From good to bad, bad to good. Wealth can change someone, Love can change someone. I hate him; I don’t care if we’re now related. I hate him.

I’ve always dreamt that I would be just like him. But people change. He changed.

After he left, it was obvious that I was going to take over. Even though, theres still a test between me and my brother.I’m going to be the successful one. Because, I’m not going to fail, unlike him. I will take my revenge. I will have my vengeance.

He. Will. Die.

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  1. Hm, I don’t know… I kind of liked it, but tell me what you think: The grammar, The vocab, The plot?

    Tell me what you think yei?

    😀

    a guess?

    who is he?

  2. For just this part, it’s pretty good. The last line is a bit overdramatic with the punctuation, but the rest is good.

    I shall guess Grub or Myles. If I were writing it, ‘twould be Myles, but I can’t tell if it’s Grub in this one.

  3. I’m going to guess Grub if only for the reason I like Grub.

    It seems okay. You might have been a /bit/ (what bit?) overdramatic with the punctuation at the end, but overlooking that, I’m curious as to what happens next. Write on, good authoress! Write on! (pun intended)

  4. That’s (pretty) good. Grammar was okay, punctuation a bit off, but I want to see what will happen next. It sounds like it’ll be pretty good. 😉

  5. I’m pretty sure it’s Myles-kun…

  6. Pretty good so far. Idk y… but for some reason I thought it was Juliet….:( which is kind of embarrasing, but o well.

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