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Crazzy

Summary: He opened his eyes, only to find he was in the same place he had always been; a white padded […]

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He opened his eyes, only to find he was in the same place he had always been; a white padded room. His nose itched like mad, and he couldn’t remember the last time he had gone to the bathroom. In fact the last bit off his memorie before the room, was of a needle. He had no idea to who the needle belonged to or what was in it, just that there was in fact a needle. And if his calculations were correct, the needle had penetrated his skin onΒ  one side off his hand and emerged from the other. there for pain, must have been his last memorie. Physical pain, and emotional pain. But were the hell was the emotional pain coming from?

His eyes moved around the white room, searching desperately for a way out, but there was no way out….. “How is that possible?” he thought as he scanned the room for any sort of clue. ” I had to get in here somehow, so there must be a way out.” his brow wrinkled as his eyes ran the walls, absorbing every little detail that could help him escape from his prison. Suddenly there was a movement, and a heavy sound. It was as if his brain had been reopened. The door was behind him!

Artemis fell back, and with his arms hopelessly locked at his sides by a strait jacket, his head hit solid concrete with a load smack! And every thing was dark once more.

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  1. I’ll be honest. By the misspelled title, I wasn’t expecting much. I was pleasantly surprised.

    That was good. πŸ™‚ You need to run it through a spellchecker and work on your grammar and punctuation just a tiny bit, but the wording and writing is excellent. I’d be interested in seeing where this goes.

  2. Hmm… I think that’s quite good. πŸ™‚

    AA is correct, you may want to run it through a spell-check. That would make an amazing difference. πŸ˜‰ The ounctuation was pretty good, and the grammar needs just an itty bitty bit of work.
    An all around great story. πŸ˜€ I must advise you to continue, as I’d love to know how this ends….

    ~CC

  3. I ditto all the above.
    I wasn’t expecting anything this good when I saw the mispelled title. I thought it might’ve been one of those one off-shouldabeenfunnehbutnotrealleh-stories.

    I was very suprised. This is was great and your writing style is awesome. Spellchecker is a writers best friend…tho I hate using it myself (that’s why my stories suck πŸ˜‰ ) but yeah awesome…very awesome.

  4. needs a tiny bit o’ editing, but it was good. did you misspell the title for a reason? i know i did…. please, continue. I want to see where this is heading.

  5. Yeah, the editing part. But quite interstin!! And what /is/ the reason for the title having to Z’s? Update soon!!

  6. Beckett Simpleton July 5th, 2010 at 11:17 pm 6

    is it supposed to have 2 z’s in crazzy? And a little more please, i am intreagued!

  7. You all torture me! Write excellent fanfictions the leave a cliff hanger

  8. it was quite good but I agree with AA

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