Artemis Fowl and The Neon Crystal (part two)

Summary: why is the neon crystal so important to the people?Why can't Holly talk about it??

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Um,this time I don’t blame you if nobody but silver and elfie reviewed part one cuz I posted that yesterday. Well wnhatever. Hope you enjoy this people,it’s a lot of effort writing this on touch screen.

-shaadia

HAVEN CITY

Artemis stared at her.

‘I don’t happen to know what the neon crystal is,Holly.”

Holly sighed deeply. ‘It’s…complicated. You wouldn’t understand.’

‘Yes I would. Now tell me what has happened.’

Beckett and Myles looked curious. ‘Tell us,Holly.’

Holly looked at the three humans,nervous. ‘You would understand better if Foaly told you,I guess.’

Artemis frowned. ‘It would save time if you told us right now.’

He suddenly realized how quickly Holly’s confidence had dropped when he had asked his question. She had gone from cheerful to a not-sure-what-to-say-or-do mood.

‘Holly…’
‘I don’t think you should know,Artemis.This could be a dangerous thing,and…and…’

It was surprising enough when Holly immeadeately turned the other way,sobbing gently.
‘Eh…is something…wrong?’
Holly spun around,a serious look on her face. ‘Do you THINK something is wrong,mudboy? Does it look like I’m alright?’
Beckett whistled. ‘Someone’s getting really annoyed’
Holly brushed away the tears on her face,glaring

‘Later.’

A/N sorry its short.i was writing in the car.

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5 responses to “Artemis Fowl and The Neon Crystal (part two).” Join in!

  1. I like this new plot! It is short but you get brownie points for both typing it in the car AND in a touch screen. I also don’t see any MAJOR grammatical errors.

    Keep it up!

  2. And you’re still carrying out the suspense of what this ‘neon cube’ is. Naughty 😉
    Kudos for getting this out with the materials you had. Grammar’s good as always, spelling’s good, plot’s coming along. (Still a bit to early to see where this is going, can’t say much there :3)
    Here’s a small puntuational {see what I did there? Eh? Eh? XD} tip: After a comma, put s space. It makes words seem less squishy. You get what I’m saying? 🙂
    Keep up the good work.
    Elifie~

  3. aw,thanks again silver. you get two lollipops for the encouragement and for being my first commentor!

    you’re so cool elfie! thanks! um,yeah,the neon crystal happens to be holly’s “family secret” which is important to the others cuz…dude,i said too much already. gonna ruin my surprise,if you could call it that. sorry:) hmm,another thing…i have never replied to a comment before and uh,could ya tell me what exactly happens when i reply? really sorry if i’m bothering you or anything.

  4. The neon crystal is Holly’s family secret? That explains why she seems so touchy about it. Hmm… I’m gonna have to ponder this for a while. *thinks for a minute, then frowns* 🙁 Wait, what does that have to do with the others? ???
    Really good so far. More updates!!! (Whoops, that sounded kinda rude) Please? 🙂

  5. i am not gonna reveal it until the next update,even by accident. oops,my bad,did i sound rude there? sorry. and the next part will be longer,i promise! read it if you wanna know, k? thanks 4 reading!*smiles* *brother enters room* *frowns* *chases him out* *smiles again* 🙂

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