Artemis Fowl and the Four Elements 2: The Fight for the Truth
Written on June 1st, 2008 by shanetteStory Details
Chapter 4
The fight for their lives
As Diana and David stood there, horrified by the scene, their minds refused to process any of the possibilities. Diana stepped nearer towards the ice block, where David’s mother and friends lay frozen in strange positions. “Who could have done this? ”
He shrugged. “I have no idea. We have to get them out. ” But Diana gestured for him to keep quiet. “It’s near by. The thing that did this. ” David looked at her questioningly, but Diana just said, “Let’s go outside. ” But as she moved, David grabbed her hand, and held her. “Are you sure? ” he asked, with concern in his eyes. Diana smiled.
“Don’t worry. I’ll be OK. Now just follow me. ”
The two of them walked out of he house, and looked around the beautiful garden. But no one was in sight. Everything seemed normal outside, nothing seemed to be harmed. “Strange, ” Diana commented, but too bad she didn’t look up.
In a second, something really hard hit the floor right in front of the duo. It was so hard that they were flung of the ground. “WHOA! ” they both screamed, and landed hard on the hard soil. David recovered first, only to get a very nasty shock.
The ground in front of him was filled with shattered pieces of ice. ”What the heck? ” David exclaimed, shocked and confused at the same time. Ice again. This was starting to irritate him. Where was the ice coming from?
He got his answer in a minute. The next second, a figure came down and hit him at lightning speed. It was so fast that he couldn’t see who that was. He fell, and was hurt really badly. Whoever that was had strength. Inhuman strength. David could hardly feel his limbs.
But now Diana was worried. She hadn’t seen David getting attacked, and after hearing David’s shout, she got even more nervous. But she calmed herself down, and helped him up. But then, as she turned around, she got hit. Pissed off, she stood up, and got quite a surprise.
There was a teenage girl standing there, on the garden a few metres away from them. She looked a little older than them, and had long, blue hair, and large green eyes. She was quite a sight, with the most terrifying anger written all over her face.
Diana backed away, looking strangely at the girl. She looked extremely angry. “You caused all that ice? ” Diana asked, realising that that was a stupid question.
“What do you think? ” she snarled. And charged at Diana.
Diana was, unfortunately, not quick enough to dodge the tall girl. Diana was shorter than her, and was no match against her strength. She was easily sabotaged, and remained on the garden grass, weaker than she ever felt. She tried to sit up, but failed. But she could turn her neck to look at the teenager.
“What was that for? ” she shouted, and she regreted that an instant later, when a searing pain hit her.
“That was for causing our family almost 17 years of pain. ”
“I don’t even know your family! ” Diana really shouted this time, until she realised something.
The girl smirked. “Tut tut, didn’t listen carefully to what I said. And by the way, name’s Jane, ” she said, before giving Diana a very, very hard punch.
A few seconds ago, before she had passed out, Diana realised that Jane had said ‘our family’, not ‘my family’. And as she thought that and drifted away, Artemis was walking down the lane reaching the mansion.

June 1st, 2008 at 8:50 am
Hey guys! Some of you may find this story familiar. Just a news flash: I had to re-publish this because, well, I couldn’t update at all the last time. I’m technologically cursed, like Lydia Tall.
Anyways, enjoy the story!
June 1st, 2008 at 6:11 pm
The sentences are somewhat choppy, but otherwise okay. It wasn’t bad, though…who’s the jerk who rated it a one?
June 2nd, 2008 at 4:00 am
Ahh, choppy? Hmm, I’ll amend it accordingly. Lol, I think the ratings have been cleared again.
June 2nd, 2008 at 5:06 am
These sentences were either choppy, or incomplete sentences.
Diana had a crisis. David just shouted at her. Because Artemis’s mother had adopted her. Why was he acting like that? He never even scolded her before. And this time, Diana let her tears flow. They were overpowering her eyes. Was he overprotective? Or did he just want Diana to stay in his house? Was he lonely without her?
Sorry, I’m just picky like that and it really bothered me.
June 2nd, 2008 at 6:00 am
Oh, I get what you mean. OK, maybe I’ll join some up together and make the sentences longer.
June 2nd, 2008 at 8:13 am
I don’t really like my introduction myself… just a few ammendments… Ahh. There we go.
June 4th, 2008 at 4:28 pm
I admit it. Romance is definitely NOT my type. But when you look at every guide to writing they have here, they just say you have to have a little. And that just makes me uncomfortable.
June 12th, 2008 at 7:41 pm
LOL well I loved the first one, and the second is awesome too. The story’s great. I can see that the sentences are a bit choppy as well, though I didn’t know how to put it into words. Choppy fits though. Overall, it isn’t bad in the slightest.
June 13th, 2008 at 8:54 am
Yay Olive!!
-jumps around happily for a few seconds!!-
Great to have you back!!
I’m adding chapter 13 now.
:)
Yuck.
Romance.
I hate this.
:)
But more action coming right up!!
August 5th, 2008 at 4:46 am
Thgis is great please continue it soon