Artemis Fowl and the Four Elements 2: The Fight for the Truth

Written on June 1st, 2008 by shanette

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Chapter 13

A bad 24 hours.

It seemed forever. It truly did.

 

 

 

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10 Reviews for “Artemis Fowl and the Four Elements 2: The Fight for the Truth”

  1. shanette Says:
    June 1st, 2008 at 8:50 am

    Hey guys! Some of you may find this story familiar. Just a news flash: I had to re-publish this because, well, I couldn’t update at all the last time. I’m technologically cursed, like Lydia Tall. :P
    Anyways, enjoy the story!

  2. Star Jinin Says:
    June 1st, 2008 at 6:11 pm

    The sentences are somewhat choppy, but otherwise okay. It wasn’t bad, though…who’s the jerk who rated it a one?

  3. shanette Says:
    June 2nd, 2008 at 4:00 am

    Ahh, choppy? Hmm, I’ll amend it accordingly. Lol, I think the ratings have been cleared again.

  4. Star Jinin Says:
    June 2nd, 2008 at 5:06 am

    These sentences were either choppy, or incomplete sentences.
    Diana had a crisis. David just shouted at her. Because Artemis’s mother had adopted her. Why was he acting like that? He never even scolded her before. And this time, Diana let her tears flow. They were overpowering her eyes. Was he overprotective? Or did he just want Diana to stay in his house? Was he lonely without her?
    Sorry, I’m just picky like that and it really bothered me.

  5. shanette Says:
    June 2nd, 2008 at 6:00 am

    Oh, I get what you mean. OK, maybe I’ll join some up together and make the sentences longer.

  6. shanette Says:
    June 2nd, 2008 at 8:13 am

    I don’t really like my introduction myself… just a few ammendments… Ahh. There we go.

  7. Shanette Says:
    June 4th, 2008 at 4:28 pm

    I admit it. Romance is definitely NOT my type. But when you look at every guide to writing they have here, they just say you have to have a little. And that just makes me uncomfortable.

  8. Olive Says:
    June 12th, 2008 at 7:41 pm

    LOL well I loved the first one, and the second is awesome too. The story’s great. I can see that the sentences are a bit choppy as well, though I didn’t know how to put it into words. Choppy fits though. Overall, it isn’t bad in the slightest. :)

  9. Shanette Says:
    June 13th, 2008 at 8:54 am

    Yay Olive!!
    -jumps around happily for a few seconds!!-
    Great to have you back!!
    I’m adding chapter 13 now.
    :)
    Yuck.
    Romance.
    I hate this.
    :)
    But more action coming right up!!

  10. Holly Short Says:
    August 5th, 2008 at 4:46 am

    Thgis is great please continue it soon

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