Artemis Fowl and the Four Elements 2: The Fight for the Truth
Written on June 1st, 2008 by shanetteStory Details
Chapter 12
A twist
Diana had to admit that the plan sounded somewhat strange. It was not like in the movies, where you just go there, save the guys and live happily ever after. It was so much harder in real life.
She took out the communicator Artemis had given her, and pressed the blue button, the one that Artemis said would enable her to reach Holly. And sure enough, within a few seconds, Holly answered the call.
“Artemis, any problem? ”
Diana smiled hearing Holly’s voice. It was so good to hear the voice of the… elf… who had saved her life so many years back.
“Hey Holly, er… Diana here. Listen, we got a problem. ” And she described everything that happened in the last two days.
“Oh… don’t worry. I can track Artemis down with the empathy link, ” she said. Diana remembered Holly telling her that the empathy link was one of Foaly’s newest yet greatest inventions. It not only allowed one to read another’s feelings, but also allowed him or her to track the energy flow from each and every living being.
As Holly told Foaly the situation, it was getting dark. The sky was getting heavy with clouds, and soon, rain was pouring down from the night sky. There wasn’t a single star in sight.
David signalled to Diana that he was going to set up camp for then night, and he found a cave at the edge of a nearby field. Not wanting to waste the little magic he had left, he set up camp slowly.
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Diana cane up to him, looking solemn. David knew there wasn’t good news.
“Did that link thingy work? ” he asked her.
She nodded. “Artemis is stuck at the Koboi labs… again. ”
David groaned. “We have to go there? ”
Diana didn’t look any happier. “Yeah. With all those lasers.” She shuddered. The elements didn’t like lasers. It upsets their systems, a lot.
“This feels hopeless now. I don’t feel like going. ” Diana sat beside the fire, warming herself up. Outside the cave, the air got really chilly, and being the wielder of fire, she didn’t like the cold.
David turned to face Diana, and saw his best friend for life dejected so deeply, it just had to hurt him.
“Why do you hate that place so much? ”
“I don’t know, it just scares me. ”
David laid his hand on Diana’s shoulder, and immediately all her senses went to hyper-alert mode. Then he shivered when his hand slid down her back, down her arm, and took hold of her hand.
“What in heavens’ name are you doing? ” Diana asked, her heart beating a little too fast.
“Nothing, ” David said.
And he kissed her.

June 1st, 2008 at 8:50 am
Hey guys! Some of you may find this story familiar. Just a news flash: I had to re-publish this because, well, I couldn’t update at all the last time. I’m technologically cursed, like Lydia Tall.
Anyways, enjoy the story!
June 1st, 2008 at 6:11 pm
The sentences are somewhat choppy, but otherwise okay. It wasn’t bad, though…who’s the jerk who rated it a one?
June 2nd, 2008 at 4:00 am
Ahh, choppy? Hmm, I’ll amend it accordingly. Lol, I think the ratings have been cleared again.
June 2nd, 2008 at 5:06 am
These sentences were either choppy, or incomplete sentences.
Diana had a crisis. David just shouted at her. Because Artemis’s mother had adopted her. Why was he acting like that? He never even scolded her before. And this time, Diana let her tears flow. They were overpowering her eyes. Was he overprotective? Or did he just want Diana to stay in his house? Was he lonely without her?
Sorry, I’m just picky like that and it really bothered me.
June 2nd, 2008 at 6:00 am
Oh, I get what you mean. OK, maybe I’ll join some up together and make the sentences longer.
June 2nd, 2008 at 8:13 am
I don’t really like my introduction myself… just a few ammendments… Ahh. There we go.
June 4th, 2008 at 4:28 pm
I admit it. Romance is definitely NOT my type. But when you look at every guide to writing they have here, they just say you have to have a little. And that just makes me uncomfortable.
June 12th, 2008 at 7:41 pm
LOL well I loved the first one, and the second is awesome too. The story’s great. I can see that the sentences are a bit choppy as well, though I didn’t know how to put it into words. Choppy fits though. Overall, it isn’t bad in the slightest.
June 13th, 2008 at 8:54 am
Yay Olive!!
-jumps around happily for a few seconds!!-
Great to have you back!!
I’m adding chapter 13 now.
:)
Yuck.
Romance.
I hate this.
:)
But more action coming right up!!
August 5th, 2008 at 4:46 am
Thgis is great please continue it soon