Artemis Fowl and The four elements
Written on December 25th, 2007 by shanetteStory Details
(3 votes, average: 3.67 out of 5)
Loading ...A/n: Hies this is my second story, I felt the old one a little weird now… anyways, i hope ya like this one! ( But just hang in there, i have to explain one of the main characters 1st )
Chapter 1
Introduction
Diana sighed, slumped on her chair. Boys. They never understood a young lady’s heart. Stupid David, she thought, scolding me for telling him how i feel. what do i do? Diana felt tears prickling her eyes. ‘ Oh no,’ she thought, ‘ Im not going to cry… Im not going to cry… I AM NOT GOING TO CRY!’ and she didn’t. That’s the thing with these elements, they can steel themselves so well.
What Diana longed for her whole life was a family. A home, where laughter and happiness filled every corner. Diana was orphaned at the age of 1, and since then her really nasty and rich foster parents have been looking after her.
But recently, they have witnessed the most horrifying things Diana could do to you if you made her angry, ( example, she can bite fingers right off your hands )and they abandoned her at the age of 7, but she had been saved by an unknown person at night, and when they administered her in a school, she got the present of a lifetime…
Don’t know what i’m talking about? Lets take a look at Diana’s life, shall we?
A/N: If you’re looking for artemis, he’ll be around later after we find out what I’m talking about.
December 25th, 2007 at 5:13 am
RR&R
constructive critisism encouraged!
thx a lot!!
December 25th, 2007 at 7:02 am
(first comment dance!) ((technically…)) Okay, although Artemis isn’t in it until the sixth chapter, I still liked it. Very interesting, although it sounded a bit like Avatar for awhile. LOL. Anyway, post an announcement when you update because otherwise I, in my forgetfull nature, will forget to check back, but keep up the good work.
December 25th, 2007 at 7:12 am
LOL sure thx …
well i did get just one teeny tiny idea from avatar
hey what can i say i like nickelodeon!
December 25th, 2007 at 4:10 pm
well i like it too, so it’s all good! =D anyway, i like the latest update a lot. i loved the cliff hanger you made earlier too, that was great and kept me wondering.
December 25th, 2007 at 5:54 pm
HMMMMMMMMM…………… Kind of a kung-fu Avatar thingy!!!!! Mee likey!!! CONTINUE!
December 26th, 2007 at 5:01 am
wow thx alot…
i will update soon and try to keep more suspence mwahaha =)
December 26th, 2007 at 8:56 am
Yeah, i love the Avatar. Just make sure you dont end up making it too much like the Avatar, Your story is too good as it is.
It is a very good story, which i will continue reading.
December 26th, 2007 at 9:06 am
thx!!! i am like so happy all of you like it!
December 26th, 2007 at 5:12 pm
lol i love it four elemants like the show avatar?
December 26th, 2007 at 7:11 pm
OMG AVATAR CROSSOVER I LOVE LOVE LOVE THAT SHOW SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thankyou for making my boxing-day good. This is very well written btw lol I am gripped!
December 27th, 2007 at 12:37 am
anyway, i love these chapters too. imagining artemis with an elvis wig on is very amusing for me.
December 27th, 2007 at 12:44 am
i like it
December 27th, 2007 at 7:40 am
yeah… i like the elvis wig part
Don’t worry, I will keep updating!
December 30th, 2007 at 2:28 pm
Guys please comment or rate or do anything possible!
December 30th, 2007 at 11:02 pm
I like this story and have sense day one. It’s great, so please continue!
December 31st, 2007 at 5:57 am
I really like it , its intresting , the show ” avatar” wow , i used to watch that like a few years ago , thats what i thought of when i read the element part i also thought orf ” witch ” and another show……but i really like it and u must continue!
December 31st, 2007 at 5:58 am
i gave it a 4
January 1st, 2008 at 12:57 pm
* Opened mouth *
ok, there’s only one thing bad about 2008
school starts, and i can onli update once a week, on sundays.
zzzzzzzzzzz….
January 1st, 2008 at 1:13 pm
* SMALL NOTE *
mahi u watched that show a few years ago?
er dun mind me askin how old are you?
hehe, ( don’t call me cheeky! )
January 1st, 2008 at 2:29 pm
No thats okay , ummm you meen ” witch” I’m 11 BUT AM TURMNING 12 IN 3 DAYS~! YAY! MY BIRTHDAY IS COMMING UP!
Also , is artemis 15 in this one…. becasue I dont think he is that evil… OR IS HE? lol , I realllyyyy like it and thank you for posting up the Updates so I know when to come!
January 5th, 2008 at 10:46 am
wow.. u r 12 this year i am 13 this year… lol ( please dont tell me i am the eldest here ) i have a new classmate who is also af crazy ahaha
January 6th, 2008 at 1:46 am
i adored the ending of chapter 14! keep it up!
January 6th, 2008 at 1:49 am
and by the way shanette you aren’t the oldest because i’m 15
January 6th, 2008 at 7:19 am
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO interesting lol
thx for all the comments!
u like chapter 14? oooh………
January 6th, 2008 at 6:31 pm
i really like it u must continue!
January 7th, 2008 at 11:15 am
heehee SURE! I WILL!
January 11th, 2008 at 3:14 pm
comments comments comments pls!
January 11th, 2008 at 10:32 pm
i’m 13 too when is your b-day?
January 11th, 2008 at 10:57 pm
i like the way u left chapter 16. it’s a real cliff hanger.
January 12th, 2008 at 12:13 am
I LUV IT LUV IT LUV IT!@!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!! U MUST CONTINUE! im giving it a five ( if i haven’t already rated……..) oh g8,.. i did… oh well , ill make my friend read it then rate it a 5!
January 12th, 2008 at 6:49 am
yes, i rather like this story.
Just do not fall into the trap of making it corny! if there is going to be a love story in there ( im getting that vibe because of Diana’s Beauty) make it original.
January 13th, 2008 at 10:01 am
my goodness, how did u figure that one out?
grrrrrr
hahaha
i dunno y but i am laughing madly these days.
BTW i am born on 17 june.
January 13th, 2008 at 5:34 pm
love the new update! keep it up!
January 13th, 2008 at 7:08 pm
intresting up8 , i luv it , its really good! KEEP writting!
January 14th, 2008 at 12:12 pm
UPdating…. no worries!
January 15th, 2008 at 9:28 pm
Exellent , its REALLY getting REALLY intresting! I luv it! and again , you must continue!
January 16th, 2008 at 1:00 am
OMG WAR! WRITE MORE!
January 16th, 2008 at 10:06 am
hehe, do not fear. I update almost everyday, so i am officially extremely happy.
January 17th, 2008 at 5:31 am
i love that he got injured from holly. thats awesome. girl power! lol
January 17th, 2008 at 9:38 am
haha, girl power rulez (oops, hope no boys are here lol )
January 19th, 2008 at 1:28 am
lol, well remember to post an update when u continue ! lol
January 20th, 2008 at 7:46 am
I like your description of the cell. It’s cool.
January 20th, 2008 at 4:13 pm
I still love it! pleaseee continue!
January 26th, 2008 at 3:46 pm
i just read the update , in the last sentence or so you typed ga,es instead of games. I love the update! its gre8 keep up the good work.
January 26th, 2008 at 4:31 pm
Wow. I haven’t read dis in a wonnnnnng time! Since like, the last ime i reviewed! Jeez!! Great update(s)!!!!!!!!!!
January 26th, 2008 at 7:06 pm
LOL still love the story! Keep it up!
January 27th, 2008 at 1:47 pm
wow, i havent updated in days, so sorry about that. And thanx for pointing the spelling errors, i suck at that. LOL. pls rate my story! thx!
February 6th, 2008 at 1:32 am
You only updated by a PARAGRAPH! write more sooN! Lol, keep it up , I LOVE IT!
February 10th, 2008 at 7:44 am
thank you thank you for loving my story!
yes, only a paragraph (sobs), high school is really pressurising (however you spell that) especially for a year one…….
nvm, i will update today, lets hope i can type FAST!
February 10th, 2008 at 7:52 am
Nice Cashie
HAHA
i like cashie better then shanette so lemmi call u tat.
rite more n keep up the good work k
XD
February 10th, 2008 at 7:55 am
heloooooooooooo ji hyun!!!!!!
so nice to see you here!!
how was my story? was it nice? and these are all my fellow friends who read my story. haha. ENJOY! i am updating rite now!
February 10th, 2008 at 5:13 pm
I love the update! please continue soon!
February 11th, 2008 at 12:17 am
Love it, as usual! Keep updating!
February 12th, 2008 at 2:45 pm
Thank you, Thank you.
I just updated a lot! my fingers hurt a little. But i shall ignore that pain XD
enjoy my story!
February 12th, 2008 at 11:13 pm
Artemis is going soft. LOL. I still love it! And the cliff hanger at the end is great!
February 13th, 2008 at 12:16 pm
yeah… The Artemis going soft part was more instinctive, to be honest. My guts kept telling me to type that.
Oh, and i have interesting news. I have an idea for a second story, but no name yet!
February 14th, 2008 at 4:59 am
I love that little twist! LOL
February 15th, 2008 at 11:25 am
LOL, i decided introducing Angeline would be a nice twist, and it was crucial for the ending… which i am obviously going to shut my mouth about!
February 21st, 2008 at 10:25 pm
OMG I love the end! I can normally pick out an ending long before it happens but this one I wasn’t even close to guessing! Great job! I’ll definitly be waiting for part 2.
February 22nd, 2008 at 2:21 pm
No worries, it won’t be long! And I hope my ending wasn’t too plain.
LOL, thank you all for commenting!!!
see ya soon!
February 22nd, 2008 at 5:38 pm
Yeah, I LOVE IT IT WAS AWESUM! I think when she told david how she felt he rejected her and then she went to stay with artemis, because in chappy 1 you said something like that………BUT I LOVE IT CAMNT WAIT TO READ THE SEQUAL!
February 24th, 2008 at 6:39 am
well, that is what i planned!
But dont worry, if you find that sad LOL. Because in the sequel i have already planned out what will happen!
February 24th, 2008 at 4:36 pm
lol, kewl, so whats the name of the sequel?
February 25th, 2008 at 2:41 pm
I’m not sure yet… maybe i’ll just call it part two, if i can’t come up with a name. Sounds nerdy, LOL, but i am starting soon!
February 25th, 2008 at 2:43 pm
oh yeah, its been exactly two months since i published this story, ha ha.
March 15th, 2008 at 8:26 am
Hey! Nice one there =D
March 15th, 2008 at 8:58 am
LAWL, hi there red chilli =D
May 9th, 2008 at 5:50 pm
Who red chili?
May 12th, 2008 at 3:21 pm
Whee, the retarded rachel, also known as Red chilli XD. Lol, she’s my schoolmate.
July 6th, 2008 at 8:11 pm
Whew! finished at last but enjoyed evry moment of it!!Shanette, u r a damn gud writer!!Really…:D
July 7th, 2008 at 6:15 am
THANK YOU!! Thank you so much!
I’m so happy.
THANK YOU AGAIN!
August 22nd, 2008 at 1:37 pm
SHANETTE!
I NEVER KNEW MY BABY WROTE SO WELL!
Hahaha!
Hey sweet heart your cousin Annabeth here!
And literally, you can write well.
Woot!
ROCK ON GIRL!
-Annabeth
PS: I LOVE NEW YORK. ROCKS HERE!!
August 26th, 2008 at 2:34 pm
ANNABETH!!!
-Screams uber loud-
YOU REMEMBERED ME!!!
Thankews for the compliment!
;)
October 6th, 2008 at 11:03 am
YO YO YO
Annabeth told me about this site
AND YOU
so i had to visit
Oh
On behalf of all in St Nicks
Good luck for your common test kays!
(sorry i had to wish you through this site. We hardly meet up nowadays.)
See yas!
November 1st, 2008 at 6:56 am
HELLO LEE
FINALLY
how long so i have to wait for you?
anyway
thanks!
-why dont we GO OUT then, hmm?-
tell the girls at St Nicks thanks too!