Artemis Fowl and the Elemental Spell

Summary: There is a spell hidden deep within the Fairy Book. This spell gives the user control over one of four […]

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There is a spell hidden deep within the Fairy Book. This spell gives the user control over one of four elements. Fire,Water,Wind or Earth. Nobody alive knows of it’s existence but three genii are about to find out…

LEP HQ  1200 hours

Foaly was grinning triumphantly, he had finally cracked the code and rediscovered a spell in the Book. Now to tell N1 and the council…

A Submarine in the Atlantic 1201 hours

Opal 2 was grinning fiendishly, she had just rediscovered the great and powerful (much like herself) spell in the Book. Now to use it to release her current self from prison and take over the world…

Fowl Manor 1202 hours

Artemis Fowl the second was grinning happily to himself, he had just rediscovered a spell in the Fairy Book. Now he had to get Butler and tell Holly…

“Butler will you get in here please?” Artemis called from his study.

Butler sighed Master Artemis had probably discovered a new use for some element and wanted to talk to him about it. “On my way Artemis” he replied.

When Butler arrived in his study Artemis began “Butler my old friend, I have just discovered, well actually rediscovered a spell in the Fairy Book. Anyway this spell gives the user control over one of four elements of their choice. I think we should s…”  Just then his phone rang interuptig him. He would’ve ignored it except only six people in the world knew the number and half of them were in his house.

So he whipped out his phone and was more than a little surprised when Minerva was at the other end.

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  1. Yeah, the concept and plot is good and all that, but you REALLY REALLY need to work on intros. This is kinda bland and in-yer-face. Work on the blending in, and mesh it in with the rest of the plot.

  2. Cool. Make the chapters longer. Update. •_• 🙂 😉 🙂 😉 •>• cake!!!!

  3. Okay, I really like this idea, but it’s not very suspenseful and doesnt’ exactly grab your attention. I agree with TM that you need to work on making everything fit together right. I think if you worked on it, though it could be awesome.

  4. themegamastaspeed October 30th, 2011 at 1:52 am 4

    it is awesome
    but you need more chapters

    at least those are short reveiews

    sounded kinda hillbilly

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