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Alala Fowl

Summary: This is a story about a child of Artemis and Holly. Alala will soon find out who her parents are and defeat a powerfull enemy.

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Chapter 1

I am running down a street, and I’m sure somebody’s going after me. I’m positive you have no idea what’s going on. Well, lets start at the beginning.

My name is Alala Fowl and I’m 13. I have short black hair – the kind that most boys have and light cyan eyes. I’m abnormally pale and tall. I always wear a red tank top, green army jeans, and black hiking boots. Also, I have 2 tattoos – one on the right shoulder which is a fire breathing dragon; and on the left one a skull, underneath which there are 2 bones crossing each other.

Plus, I have a strange interest in guns, knives, and bombs. I don’t have any parents and so, I live at the foster home. I don’t understand why, but everybody hate me. Maybe because I’m so strange.

Last Friday, when I was returning from school I saw the ambulance. It was standing right in front of the foster home and the doctors were running in and out of the building. Suddenly there was a “BOOM!!!” and everything went black.

When I woke up I’ve noticed that I’ve been tied to a chair and that there were 2 short people standing with guns in front of me. Then, I noticed that the guns were POINTING at me. It seemed they noticed that I woke up and started whispering something to each other. It was something about calling the boss and who would do that. They actually started a fight. After an hour or so, of fighting, the loser went to call the boss.

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  1. Artemisia Snape May 27th, 2011 at 9:17 pm 1

    WOW!!! Great story so far! I can’t see what happens next, so PLEEEEAAAAASE UPDAAAAATEEE!!! Pretty please with a sim cherry on top! 😆

  2. Fowlfan4ever May 27th, 2011 at 9:30 pm 2

    Like it! ***

  3. It’s a great start. Try to look out for them pesky grammar mistakes. Update soon.

  4. FantasyDevourer May 28th, 2011 at 4:03 am 4

    The font is kinda hard to read. I have to zoom in. Also, I didn’t think Artemis and Holly’s daughter would have tattoos. 😛
    That’s just me, though, Cool story. 🙂

  5. Great job so far! Keep it up!

  6. XD thats so good

  7. BoboParadizo May 28th, 2011 at 6:29 pm 7

    Pretty good. The paragraph describing Alala is kind of long, could you change it to 2 paragraphs or something? cuz it’s hard to read.
    Great job, keep it up!

  8. Oh…K I will! 😀

  9. I like the idea, but your vocabulary doesn’t quite meet Colfer’s.

    “everybody hate me” should be “everybody hates me.”

  10. I agree with ILoveFowl. It’s a neat idea, so please continue. And like 21bub21 said, watch out for grammar! 😛
    Perhaps you’d consider a beta to help you with that. There are a whole ton of people that would be willing to help with this idea, I’m sure. Including myself, but you can decide on your own. You might not even need one if you watch out! 😀

  11. Awesome!!! Update, please.

  12. Eragon Fowl June 3rd, 2011 at 6:25 am 12

    Update.

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