A Week On The Farm :) :P :o :mrgreen: :twisted: ;) :\ :? :| :D
Written on September 27th, 2007 by JellyStory Details
(19 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
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One savage stepped forward. She appeared to be their leader. There were strange marking all over her face and seemed to believe she was a Mudgirl because she was talking clear Chinese. “Who goes there? What visitors are you? Why have you invaded our home? Did you bring any salt? I AM HUNGRY!!!!!” Of course this sounded like gibberish to Ashley But it was clear to everyone else them being fairies, smart, or having magic. “Bow down to my awesome power little one or there will be no rain FOREVER!” cried Sara trying to trick this little person the way she had the others. Just then it began to pour.
Holly shook her head smacking as she did. Sara tried to clear things up with the doubting fairies. “This is your creator! She will surly destroy you all if you don’t bow down to her!” Just then a baby was born crying as if saying “I’m here! These people are phony!!! Artemis sighed.
“Why don’t you let me try? People of the jungle we mean no harm now if you will just LISTEN to us we must tell you something VERY important!” There is a stampede of elephants coming this way! Also there are many circus clowns inside of that-” he said pointing at the shuttle. “Thing! We must evacuate you all immediately!” Aphrodite looked at Artemis as if he were insane.
Circus clowns? What did he take this evil savages for? There leader though looked thoroughly shocked. She turned back to her clan and squeaked a few words. Everyone turned and ran. Unfortunately as they did Sara was dragged behind caught in the crowd.
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- Back in Ireland Updated!
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- Wolfgirl UPDATED SOJYMON!!!
September 27th, 2007 at 5:54 am
I live on kinda a farm…I have a horse, goat, 4 chickens, dog, 2 cats & 7 “ferocious”
strays, this story is so funny XD, Artemis is pig crap with perfume XD.
September 27th, 2007 at 12:37 pm
ha, this is good! *second comment dance*
September 27th, 2007 at 5:09 pm
no u have to do first comment dance regardless which comment it is as long as someone does it! *does FIRST comment dance* there isn’t a second one!
September 27th, 2007 at 9:59 pm
very good, i live in wisconsin!! YES GO GREEN BAY PACKERS!!!!
October 1st, 2007 at 10:24 pm
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 1st, 2007 at 10:44 pm
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!(Wants t annoy Vinyaya and does 10th comment dance-oh yeah- WORD!).
October 2nd, 2007 at 10:13 pm
OHHHHHHH really really good, keep on writing!!!
October 2nd, 2007 at 11:28 pm
interesting, but you need more idk action, people like action. but i dont think that foaly would let holly clone herself
October 2nd, 2007 at 11:50 pm
Like I said in the beginning this is a actually part of a dream I had so That part was part of my dream my dreams are rather inelegant once I dreamed Artemis was shot on a field trip but it was really his clone that was shot and when Artemis got on the bus they had been mind-wiped so as not to remember the death
October 3rd, 2007 at 6:53 pm
Ok i will tell you the truth. It doesn’t grip me enough for me to keep reading. i find it a bit samey really. But i like some of the speech and i think yu should make it a bit more actiony.
October 4th, 2007 at 4:52 pm
how old are you jelly?
October 4th, 2007 at 10:14 pm
I am 9
October 5th, 2007 at 2:52 am
for a nine year old I think I am doing a pretty good job I have 5 stories
*Artemis meets sponge bob
*Back to the past
*doorbell baby
*The real end of the world
*A week on the farm
*and I used to have My butt itches but they deleted that one because the mermaids ate Artemis and Holly and Mulch and Butler.
October 5th, 2007 at 3:25 pm
Like, the clone is evil and holly has to decide if she really can kill “Herself”
October 5th, 2007 at 3:26 pm
im at school right now, typing while the teachers are by me
October 5th, 2007 at 3:32 pm
omg ur story’s really good. BOB SAYS HI
October 5th, 2007 at 10:23 pm
I really don’t want to Kill Sara but I will think of something to that affect
October 6th, 2007 at 4:26 pm
Dude you have to keep writing this is such a good story I think that you should make Artemis RIDE the bull. Then he gets bucked off and thriwn into a hayloft or something!!
October 6th, 2007 at 8:56 pm
ohh, i have an idea, how about holly says she killed her, but she really didnt and then you can make a sequal that sara turns good but no one beleives her or something like that
October 7th, 2007 at 2:47 am
I luv this stoory
October 7th, 2007 at 7:54 pm
MMk would u plz fix my story’s order??
October 7th, 2007 at 8:01 pm
Oh, yeah, I forgot! I’ll do it now. It might take a while, though, be patient.
October 7th, 2007 at 8:01 pm
Okay, i have to say i am a little confussed.
October 7th, 2007 at 8:05 pm
Danke, thank you, gracias, and all other languages to say thank you for writing more
October 7th, 2007 at 8:55 pm
who is the migit?? okay then
October 7th, 2007 at 9:23 pm
ohhh, i see
October 8th, 2007 at 2:53 am
good
October 8th, 2007 at 10:53 pm
This is getting really good.
October 9th, 2007 at 12:17 am
OMG all my chapter are gone!!! Dude MMK if you have a sec would you fix it I just tried again and it keeps messing it up!!
October 9th, 2007 at 6:57 pm
this is a really really really really really really really REALLY good story!!
October 9th, 2007 at 6:58 pm
Update soon!
October 9th, 2007 at 11:21 pm
NVM about that, i understand now! TOOK ME LONG ENOUGH LOL
October 9th, 2007 at 11:51 pm
thank you for your support Arty_and_holly_4ever!! (I am Jelly too) it won’t let me login
October 10th, 2007 at 11:02 pm
Okay, i figured dippy was you too. Anywho, umm, it was very funny. I have to say i laughed out loud, and my mom came in and said “What are you laughing about?” I told her and she’s like, ohh, that site again??? I told her that i was reading a good story so go away! lol maybe thats not my exact words… very good
October 14th, 2007 at 9:15 pm
thnaks Arty and Holly 4ever (sorry not typed right) would you like to be in my story?
October 14th, 2007 at 9:31 pm
Hey i am in the top ten for stars!!
October 14th, 2007 at 9:33 pm
Oh sure!!! ummm, i have blonde hair, blue eyes just email me if you need any more info
October 14th, 2007 at 9:42 pm
oh yea, email is arty_and_holly_4ever@yahoo.com
October 15th, 2007 at 10:20 pm
You have your own E-mail?! that is too cool! you shall be in my story in a very clever way…
October 15th, 2007 at 10:24 pm
awsome! yea, i have like 3 but i made this one espesally for this site and everything fowl!
October 15th, 2007 at 11:53 pm
What do you want your name to be in he story?
October 15th, 2007 at 11:53 pm
JUST UPDATED!!
October 16th, 2007 at 12:38 am
please continue the story! its cool!
October 16th, 2007 at 12:41 am
My name can be Ashley. Oh n btw I LOVE THE NEW PART!!!!
October 16th, 2007 at 12:48 am
THANKS!
October 16th, 2007 at 12:52 am
Does that include 3 comments or does yours not count?
October 16th, 2007 at 12:57 am
maybe love Artygirl will make me continue!
October 16th, 2007 at 1:03 am
By the next time i get here, tomarrow, I WANT MORE STORY cause i go to go.
wish i could stay later, but t.v. shows are on right now. WRITE MORE
October 16th, 2007 at 1:05 am
promise but I need ONE more comment!
October 16th, 2007 at 1:50 pm
why are you so pushy about comments? it is startinf to get on my nerves… but the story is very good i am impressed!
October 16th, 2007 at 9:47 pm
Thanks Vinyaya! I am going to update right now because You cared enough to say something!
By the way has anyone read the book Star girl? It is REALLY good!
October 16th, 2007 at 10:08 pm
oh i read that book, n e ways get writing!!! I am here!!! lol, sry im hyper. GO PEPSI!!!!!!!!!!!!!
October 16th, 2007 at 10:56 pm
R U GOING TO WRITE MORE???? OH, I KNOW, AFTER THIS STORY ENDS, YOU CAN WRITE A SEQUAL!!!!! (I DONT WANT THIS TO END THO)
October 16th, 2007 at 11:16 pm
Okay just added now plz read!
October 17th, 2007 at 1:15 am
I reread what I wrote and the computer added a bunch of &nsb nsb amp a just ignore that sorry for the inconvenience!
October 17th, 2007 at 10:28 pm
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really good!!!!!!!!! OH, and i think sara and ashley should get boyfriends, Artemis’s clones!!!!!!!!!!!
October 18th, 2007 at 12:49 am
Hello, i am babysiting at school right now!!!!!!! n the kids say, “WRITE MORE!!!” those exact words.
October 18th, 2007 at 10:05 pm
That is so cool! I will write more in a little bit but I got writers block right now…
October 18th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
dont ya just hate writers block???
October 18th, 2007 at 11:24 pm
totaly I ave no clue what to put next yet I have some ideas just no words to describe it…
October 21st, 2007 at 2:38 am
umm, what are your ideas, maybe i can help.
October 21st, 2007 at 5:29 pm
OK I go it figured out I am going to continue right now…
October 22nd, 2007 at 11:19 pm
OK I got Chappy 11 up
October 26th, 2007 at 10:08 pm
Hey I still have this story!
October 27th, 2007 at 11:32 pm
338 people have read this! COOL!!!!
October 28th, 2007 at 1:29 am
read this!!!
October 28th, 2007 at 1:49 am
interesting. Good job! Keep on writing
October 28th, 2007 at 2:06 am
I just added! now there’s a chapter 12!
October 28th, 2007 at 6:44 pm
YES GO TREE CLIMBING!! good job!!! really good!! AWSOME!!!
October 29th, 2007 at 11:24 pm
13 chappy has been added!!
October 30th, 2007 at 1:19 am
please rate!
October 30th, 2007 at 1:27 am
OHHHH who’s blood must go to australia to get Jelly to write *starts to foam at the mouth* Who got stabbed with the stick?????
October 30th, 2007 at 1:30 am
lol
you shall see.
November 1st, 2007 at 12:48 am
i just read it, wow, compelling!!!!!! P.S. you could do with some paragraphing cause its kinda hard to read but otherwise I LOVED IT. DONT KILL ME PLEASE!
November 1st, 2007 at 1:45 am
I will try harder next time!
November 3rd, 2007 at 4:51 pm
READ! THE NEXT CHAPPY IS UP!!
November 3rd, 2007 at 5:30 pm
PLEASE RATE!!!
November 3rd, 2007 at 7:28 pm
fox???? huh? Julius?? Arty is called a loser by… holly??????? ohhhhhhhh me likey!!
November 3rd, 2007 at 8:09 pm
if you go to my story copy cat then you will see why she is a fox.
November 3rd, 2007 at 10:35 pm
i just read the newest chapters and I LOVE THEM!!!
November 3rd, 2007 at 10:58 pm
you may think it is Almost over but isn’t. It will get a lot more interesting really soon!
November 4th, 2007 at 2:31 am
ok this is the first time i have read it (i dont know why i didnt read it wen it first came out) andddd i luv it and really want u to continue …only one question…were did Aisha come from??
November 4th, 2007 at 12:20 pm
I am an undercover agent for the LEP there to save holly’s life!!!!!!!!!???????? wow i havn’t read this in a while… it has got really really good since you added the OCs lol PLEASE don’t kill me off!
November 4th, 2007 at 12:29 pm
wen i read the whole under cover bit i could just imagine the james bond music to go with it
lol
November 4th, 2007 at 7:11 pm
Ashia was Opal’s slave, Mai was the fox found in the sand hole (she turned into fairy form ) Aphrodite is the undercover agent, and now Diana is going to be in the next chapter….. (she might die)
November 4th, 2007 at 8:24 pm
Well, Well, Well, a 16th chapter has been made yet no one responds! WHAT IS WRONG WITH IT?!?!?!
*sob sob* Nah I don’t think anyone would respond that quick! I JUST UPDATED!!!!!
November 5th, 2007 at 1:21 am
ohhhh i’ll respond! i logged off just as all the new updates and stories came! lol.
anyway,,,,,,,,,,i love where this is goin
ALSO!!! Ashia is one of the coolest names i know…dont ask y thou coz i dont even know….ok i seem a bit random now lol
November 5th, 2007 at 9:36 am
WAT ! NOOOO
November 5th, 2007 at 11:02 pm
I guess it’s too late for me to be in the story, huh?!
November 5th, 2007 at 11:02 pm
:P i like it!!
November 5th, 2007 at 11:06 pm
idk depends on how the rest of it goes! I mean there will be at LEAST 25 chapters! so it kind of depends on what happens in those. If you want you can still leave a charaters profile in Copy cat I it could be used!
November 6th, 2007 at 2:16 am
k thnx!
November 6th, 2007 at 2:43 am
how do u do that smiley?
November 6th, 2007 at 6:28 am
ok the whole WAT NOO! thing “I” wrote…i didn’t write that pplz!! IM NOT THAT CRAZY!
November 6th, 2007 at 7:45 am
yes how do u do that smiley….all i can make is
:S
November 6th, 2007 at 10:46 pm
How do you do that 2nd smily? all I know r these
also lil arty you did write that. you typed when you read the secret.
November 6th, 2007 at 10:49 pm
I did IT all the simileys! ok the two you don’t know r put in like this : then this ( the other is : then p and last that one is ; then )
I will delete this when you know how.
November 8th, 2007 at 12:43 am
Ok i put my profile in all i have to do is wait and see………
November 8th, 2007 at 7:33 am
i did write it???? ok maybe im loosing my mind
November 9th, 2007 at 12:03 am
I am ever so sorry that this couldn’t be in chapter form but I updated and iI hope you like it!
November 9th, 2007 at 1:15 am
If im in (wich im sayin’ i dont hafta be) when do i come in!!!!!! JK but I lurve this story!!! Diana…. dies??!!! (insert sad smily here) ohhhhhhhhhh sad!!! this is a lot of reveiws!!! 101!!!
November 9th, 2007 at 2:55 am
you WILL be in it!!! but not just yet. You have to be patient because this story is getting longer and longer so I must use every idea that I wrote on my fish tank (in window marker for the ideas I get at night.) also I WILL update soon but I am working on the sequel so hush people! This IS a work in progress.
November 9th, 2007 at 8:00 am
OMG AN EVIL RACHEL THAT KILLS KIDS AND FEED THEM TO CREATURES!!!
Note to everyone on this site: since i guess that we are all sorta kids like ya know….RUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNnn!!!!!!!!!!!!
November 9th, 2007 at 11:09 pm
don’t worry there will be nothing in here that is rated R maybe pg13 but most likely not. unless you include kissing as pg13.
but no one will probably kiss until the sequel.
SEQUEL!!!!!
November 10th, 2007 at 12:30 am
sequel? did i read correctly? lol
November 11th, 2007 at 9:42 pm
I am just rereading this and in chappy 11 Holly is supposed to faint and then it chappy 12 it is Sara’s POV. sorry for any confusion.
November 12th, 2007 at 1:54 am
hello, really good ch. n e ways, has anyone read the twilight series?? everytime i think about edward, i picture artemis fowl lol. i guess thats what artemis gets for looking like a vampire, i am thinking of writing a fanfic about that. hum that gave me an idea!!!! but not tonight
November 12th, 2007 at 4:53 am
wat is this twilight series~~~!!! some one tell me!
November 12th, 2007 at 5:26 am
every time some says edward , I think of Edward elric , a t.v show person , he’s nioce , but not at all like artemis , …..DEFFINITLY NOT ARTEMIS , Any one who knows Edward Elric know’s what I mean , i included him , in one of my story’s. I SEROISLY NEED TO READ THE TWILIGHT SERIES NOW , YOU PEOPLE ARE MAKING ME GO CRAZY!
November 14th, 2007 at 11:17 pm
what is the twiliht series? anywho I am updating this weekend!
November 18th, 2007 at 3:24 am
CRAP jelly!! I was gone $ ! week and U haven’t updated!!!! TO Arty_Holly_4ever I aggree I think ArTY looks like “EDDIE” thnx “jellsbells” 4 updating this weekend!!
November 19th, 2007 at 3:01 am
i m sorry for not updating this weekend! We have been very busy I barley found the time to go on today! however I did post a preview of the sequel and am still working on my story The secret box! I will post it right now!
November 19th, 2007 at 11:24 pm
updating right now! chapter 18 here I come!!
November 20th, 2007 at 1:09 am
Right now?? Yayy!!!!!btw Jelly how do u do it. I mean make such awesome stORIES? like most of the top tens is..is…a YOUR stories.
November 20th, 2007 at 1:31 am
idk. i just write! last summer I didn’t know about this site and when I was riding the lawn mower It came to me to make a story About Artemis Fowl. I did this one and I monologued it out to myself. Then I came across this site! I didn’t think I was a very good writer at first but after I wrote my first story I got more confidence! I wrote a second (which the editors hated!) Then I wrote this and and started out with one chapter to see who responded! alot of people liked it so I continued. These reviews are what I thrive on! They r what make me keep going!!!
u just have to set a goal for yourself that is to high so that when you get so close to the goal it is high enough for everyone else. alot of reason for someone who “idk’s!” 
November 20th, 2007 at 3:15 am
Go to A week on the farm part two for the rest of the chapter!
November 20th, 2007 at 3:21 am
okay… too big of an explanation.. I bet u planned that speach .. waiting for anyone to ask…. Lol..kidding , I know u didn’t
November 21st, 2007 at 9:33 pm
Okay sue me I read New Moon B4 i read Twilight!!!! but my mommy is buying me twilight to day!!!!!(hopefully!!) great story for the umpteenth time!!
~Love u all!!!!
ARTY’SELFFRIEND
November 22nd, 2007 at 3:22 am
Ohh, i love that book, its my 2nd fav. series. I hated new moon tho, well it was my least fav. I LOVED the new chapter!!! HAPPPY THANKSGIVING
November 22nd, 2007 at 3:24 am
Oh, and Twilight is a Vampire story!!! *SIGH* i still dont know how to make those smilies!!!!! I will have to ask my friend. I LOVE THE STORY. G2g BYE SO LONG!!
November 22nd, 2007 at 3:51 am
thos smiles r made like dis :p only a capital P!
I STILL have to read the twilight series.
p.s. I live in Australia we don’t have Thanksgiving!
( I finally looked it up to see what it was!)
November 22nd, 2007 at 4:17 am
:P thank you now I can do it too! I NEVER READ THE TWILIGHT SERIES , I HEARD IT WAS AWESOME! I want to get it! THEY DON’T CELEBRATE THANKSGIVING IN AUSTRALIA!HOW RUDE! do u guys get days off for thanksgiving? ( I don’t celebrate thanksgiving either byut this year we are having a party! whoooh!!! at my aunts mansion! AND NO I AM NOT LYING! MANSION! WITH A MOVIE THEATER! my cousin is sooo lucky..)
November 22nd, 2007 at 4:18 am
hey
didn’t woooork!!
November 22nd, 2007 at 5:04 pm
Thanksgiving celebrates The Native Americans Helping The Pilgrims and then giving Thanks to God at their feast. Every Sunday we go to Church but we don’t have a big feast because it didn’t didn’t happen here!
November 24th, 2007 at 7:25 pm
i am almost done with twilight!! clap for me!!!
November 24th, 2007 at 7:27 pm
*claps* good for u! I will update this story tomorrow because today I have to help my mom with Christmas decorations and we are going to go see a movie called Shrek 3 I think that’s how u spell it…
November 25th, 2007 at 8:20 pm
UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 476 MORE WORDS!!!!
November 27th, 2007 at 11:02 pm
AWSOME!!! GO ME!!! LOVE IT.
November 28th, 2007 at 1:40 am
This is a preeeety good story. I like it.
November 28th, 2007 at 1:41 am
how do u do that smily?
November 28th, 2007 at 2:23 am
just copy it! It is :LOL: only in lowercase
November 28th, 2007 at 2:29 am
OK IS ANYBODY ELSE A LITTLE CONFUSED?AND HOW DO YOU DO THE SMILIES?
November 28th, 2007 at 2:35 am
just look at the title on here and it shows u
November 28th, 2007 at 2:37 am
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..
November 28th, 2007 at 11:00 pm
how r u confused? maybe I can explain it.
November 28th, 2007 at 11:16 pm
UMM…. I GET IT…C –
November 29th, 2007 at 11:31 pm
okay, that was a little weird, GET WRITIN’ GIRL!!! we need some more. gosh i am so freaking bored, anyone have anything fun to do???? Anyone have livejournal, cause yea, i have one n yea, so yea, that was a lot of yeas. see how bored i am!!!! SOMEONE SAVE ME!!
November 30th, 2007 at 12:20 am
WHY IS THIS CHAPTER WEIRD?!?!?! SOMEONE TELL ME!!!! I am Sorry A&H$EVER I don’t have time to do an entire chapter.
November 30th, 2007 at 3:46 am
I DID have time to do another chappy so I DID! I hope this clears some stuff up!
November 30th, 2007 at 11:18 pm
YES! very good, i liked it. i already rated it a 5 a long time ago so i cant right now.
December 2nd, 2007 at 4:36 am
I JUST updated! I can’t wait for the 23rd chappy but I WILL NOT continue unless I get minimum of 2 comments.
December 2nd, 2007 at 8:39 pm
It’s good so far… I’m still reading it though. How do you do those smiley faces?
December 2nd, 2007 at 8:43 pm
:):P:D
xDXD:S:s but u put sapces in between them all.
December 3rd, 2007 at 11:06 pm
Still going strong, keep on writing!!
December 4th, 2007 at 2:34 am
Gonna continue in a few moments!
December 5th, 2007 at 11:46 pm
really??? JELLY IF ONE OF THE PEOPLE IN THE GROUP OF SAVAGE FAIRIES IS MY PERSON, I AM GONNA B SOOOOOO MAD I AM NOT A CANNIBAL!!!!
sorry for my rant there but huhuhuh yeah. weeel i Lurve the new chappies!!!! 
December 5th, 2007 at 11:58 pm
The savages r not cannibals but u r in the group. u will c it will b good!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:18 am
nice, still lovin it!
December 6th, 2007 at 2:53 am
UPDATED!
December 6th, 2007 at 11:39 pm
oh, so your saying i am not smart! lol
so i am thinking of writing more of my story “water” do you think i should?
December 6th, 2007 at 11:54 pm
YES! write more!!!!!!!!! oh and the smart thing… well I was talking about Artemis being a genius and learning the language and Everyone else is a fairy except for u and me and I have magic so….. Oh and ARTY’S SELFFRIEND I used you! you WILL appear again and will have a VERY big part in the story.
December 7th, 2007 at 3:45 am
Ohhhhhhhhh Jelly this is b-e-a-uteeeeful!!! I am crying thank you thank you THANK YOU!!!
JK but please,please please!!!! update soon!! :goes back to read the story again and again and again:
I am soooooooooo glad that you gave me a big part in my fave story!!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!! i cant thank you enough!!!!! :wipes tear from eye: I sound so hott when I’m in your story Jelly.
December 7th, 2007 at 3:49 am
Yeah…. my persons ascared of clowns how did Arty know that wierd
but yeah im scared of clowns. elephants. and gorrilas! how ’bout that??
December 7th, 2007 at 9:49 pm
Sighs loudly* still reading it!!!!! I HAVEN’T SLEPT ALL NIGHT I JUST DRANK A LOT OF COFFEE!!!!!! coffee’s gooooooooood let’s have coffee!!!!!! who want’s coffee huh?? who wants coffee??? nighty-night mommy…. :head drops onto keyboard:
HUH??? oh yeah…… IM STILL READING!!!!!
December 8th, 2007 at 9:00 pm
:)
Anyone want me 2 update?
December 8th, 2007 at 11:58 pm
Uh me duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! what a dumb question Jelly!
plz update ASAP
December 9th, 2007 at 12:19 am
i really wonder if that worked……….. probably not… its suppose to be a smiley… and YES I WANT AN UPDATE!
December 9th, 2007 at 12:20 am
it didn’t even come in the message!
December 9th, 2007 at 12:38 am
hahahaha it didnt comee!!!
December 9th, 2007 at 12:44 am
grrrrr!
oh well.. i got it from www.smileycentral.com they have great smileys for anyone who wants them , its free.-
December 9th, 2007 at 12:53 am
Well I will Update…. when I noe what 2 write… Oh and Mahi I am sorry I can’t go 2 the smileycentral thing- it slows down our computer… oh yeah does anyone have any ideas for the next chapter?
December 9th, 2007 at 1:02 am
oh thats okay.. no wonder y my computer is slow… i only have i meen my speed is 54.0 MB rite now…..nope no idea’s sorry!
December 9th, 2007 at 1:27 am
LUCKY!!! Mines only 14.2!!!!!! oh and I just got a glorious idea so I will b updating tomorrow!!
December 9th, 2007 at 1:37 am
cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can’t wait to read it , i know it’ll b awesum! yeah , but my dad’s computer speed is 100.0 MB now his is superfast!
December 9th, 2007 at 2:16 am
IM ONLY ON CHAPTER 12! BUT SO FAR, THIS IS AWSOME!!!! XD
December 9th, 2007 at 2:19 am
My computer speed is 720.0
December 9th, 2007 at 2:26 am
awesum
December 9th, 2007 at 2:57 am
i was just kidding i could care less. anyways, i want you to update, and i dont know, i dont think i will ever update, i might give the story to my friend at school to finish. yea, i think i will.
December 9th, 2007 at 3:28 am
WHAT?!?!?!? u can’t do that!!! I gave u ideas! u MUST finish it!!
December 9th, 2007 at 4:05 am
idk, i will finish it somtime maybe. i like your ideas though, i just need some time you know, I am having a lot of problems,
December 9th, 2007 at 4:27 am
anyway , i luv ur stories!
December 9th, 2007 at 6:28 am
Jelly you are wicked awesome!!!!!!!
That’s why we luv you!!!!!!!
Your idea better be “glorious” or the Fan Gathering pplz might get angry….
JK!!!!!!!
December 9th, 2007 at 6:33 am
i noe rite….lol
December 9th, 2007 at 7:06 pm
lol It’ll b pretty good… but not as shocking as the sequel… Oh I forgot 2 tell u guys the story is almost over!! when u guys r looking for the sequel look 4: Back to Ireland.
December 9th, 2007 at 8:11 pm
UPDATED!!
December 9th, 2007 at 8:18 pm
copool
December 10th, 2007 at 1:48 am
Ha! I wanna poison sara! this is so coolie-o!
Arty uses a rock to fix the shuttle! Caveman Arty!
December 10th, 2007 at 9:56 pm
It’s a good story. too bad it’s coming to an end…
December 10th, 2007 at 9:57 pm
You are going to do a sequel… right?
December 12th, 2007 at 11:57 pm
Well I’m going 2 try…. but for now I UPDATED!!
December 13th, 2007 at 1:52 am
It’s not too bad, but it was really confusing for the beginning chapters (something about a dolphin?). The plot lacks sparkle, too. Not bad though, sending Artemis on a farm!
December 13th, 2007 at 9:12 pm
Yeah… What was that dolphin part about?
December 13th, 2007 at 9:50 pm
umm jelly do I learn to be kind? :akward silence: geuss i’ll have to wait
Sara ran over a chipmunk with her bike?? how dare she!!
December 13th, 2007 at 10:44 pm
ARTY’SELFFRIEND:u will c! (yes)
017350, and Star Jinin: (mostly star jinin)The Dolphin part was supposed to add humor. at the end of each chapter I write a cliff hanger so that ppl will keep coming back again and again. the dolphin thing (idk which chappy it is in tho) was most likely the end of the cliffhanger. sort of like Elvis having a tea-party with the bull. Also idk what sparkle is. also WHAT R U CONFUSED ABOUT?!?!? I want 2 make this story so that everyone gets it!
December 14th, 2007 at 11:47 pm
OHHH, I LOVED IT!!! so cool! Action! Are you going to keep me in the sequal? if you do, you should make me evil, then make me go back to being nice!
*folds hand* PLEASE DONT KILL ME THO!!!!
December 15th, 2007 at 2:35 am
I don’t think that there’s anything confusing about it. I was just wondering why you put the dolphin in it. Oh Yeah! I WAS confused about why they went to the Amazon.
December 15th, 2007 at 4:50 pm
They went to the amazon to find Root. u c Opal didn’t really kill him she vaporized his partials so so now he materializes in different places sorta like the demons were. Foaly found a pattern in were he was landing and the next spot was the amazon.
December 15th, 2007 at 4:55 pm
December 15th, 2007 at 5:54 pm
Jelly- That makes so much more sense now. Thanks!
Mahi AF Fan- Yes, that’s the new smiley.
December 16th, 2007 at 3:00 am
Update Soon!
December 16th, 2007 at 9:52 am
If you do not update soon, I will send :cyclops: on you! (Sorry about that. I am a bit angry now.)
December 16th, 2007 at 6:46 pm
December 16th, 2007 at 7:44 pm
really! yay!
im anxiously awaiting it jelly!!!
December 16th, 2007 at 8:53 pm
LOL… JELLY YOU HAVE A MOB HERE AND DONT GET THEM ANGRY!
December 17th, 2007 at 11:18 pm
jfs
idk what’s going to happen next *sob sob*
but on the other hand I DID update!!
hdf
December 18th, 2007 at 2:15 am
Oh Jelly….. umm maybe someone could adopt Athea even though she tried to kill you!!! :sigh: :mourns for squirrel:
poor little squrrel….. WAIT JUST A DARN MINUTE!!!!!!! I….. KILLED.. A SQUIRREL?? I loath me! JK umm root stops passing in and out of existence, Athea stalks the group (just Athea!!) Rachel catches Arty, Sarah and Company and the “savages” save them… THOSE ARE SOME IDEAS I PULLED FROM MY MIND!!
December 18th, 2007 at 3:49 am
lih idk if I am going to use any of those but maybe…
December 18th, 2007 at 10:49 pm
There is a big long bloody battle. Mai somehow manages to hit Athea, and instead of dying, some evil spirit thing comes out of her and she is good again. Then, Foaly comes into the scene. Bringing with him another shuttle. Then he brings them back to Haven City everyone congratulates each other on a job well done. Then, they take the humans back to the surface, and they all live happily ever after… Until the sequel… What do you think? Good idea, right?
December 18th, 2007 at 11:15 pm
YEAH!! I LOVE that idea! in fact I am SO going to use part of it!(this will b deleted)
December 18th, 2007 at 11:35 pm
Thanks! I’m glad you like it!
December 19th, 2007 at 3:13 am
oh poo. Does Athea get left in the jungle after she turns good? huh? the forest scares mee
December 19th, 2007 at 3:15 am
That’s for Jelly to decide.
December 23rd, 2007 at 8:25 pm
THANK YOU!! I THOUGHT I DIED!! sry it took so long to write this, i was grounded, (cell phone in the washing machine
nearly broke it) write more please!!!!
December 24th, 2007 at 10:20 pm
Go ahead and UPDATE!!!!! It’s been this way for almost 2 weeks now!!!
P.S. Merry Xmas!!! :merryxmas:
December 26th, 2007 at 5:08 pm
I’m waiting for an update…
December 26th, 2007 at 5:58 pm
me is WAITING FOR AN UPDATE JELLY!!!!!!! Don’t make us form an angry mob again!!! :grabs pitch fork and torch:
December 26th, 2007 at 7:28 pm
Yeah! *Grabs pitchfork and torch*
December 27th, 2007 at 7:03 pm
OMG!! plz don’t hurt me!!! I know that it has been this way for a long time but I have been sick and writers block hangs in the air.
I promise to update when I feel better and have some new ideas.
December 28th, 2007 at 7:52 pm
Sounds good!!!!! *puts down pitch fork and torch* Hope you get better soon!
December 29th, 2007 at 12:11 pm
Wow. The title of this story is really misleading now. I always think of a week on a farm : gentle funny story in which artemis will learn things and everyone will have a huge laugh. And it is so much better! XD lol that is the problem wqith this site though. The story has to have a name at the start so you can’t choose one to fit the story at the end. Ach well. I like th way the Aphrodite in this story is totally different to Affy from mine. ell done jelz!
December 29th, 2007 at 6:40 pm
UPDATED! I HOPE THIS IS GOOD!!!
December 29th, 2007 at 7:07 pm
I hardly recognized this story without all the smileys in the title. But the update is very good!
December 29th, 2007 at 10:01 pm
wow there are a lot of commentes lol i like this story
December 30th, 2007 at 1:07 am
meh the last chappy was OK but WHY DO I KEEP GETTING KNOCKED OUT??? I mean really… in all of MY stories, Athea is really tough, a tomboy and most of all TOUGH!! Well… It was good and I resent forming an angry mob :throws away pitch fork and torch (both land on Minerva)
: any way so sad that this is comming to an end 
WE ALL WILL BE MISERABLE LITTLE CHILDREN ONCE MORE!
Sorry that was fun 2 type!
December 30th, 2007 at 6:15 pm
lol I just thought that it would be funny also I resent using the characters the same way other ppl had in there stories like Aphrodite.
January 3rd, 2008 at 7:53 pm
If you don’t update soon, people will stop checking to see if you’ve have.
January 3rd, 2008 at 11:53 pm
Yeah, really Jelly. I check like every five frekin’ minutes!! Updated soon!
January 7th, 2008 at 3:36 am
*Sigh* Okay, I’m bored. You had better update soon. Do you remember what we talked about the ANGRY MOB??? *Holds torch in hand* JK But that always seems to scare you!
January 7th, 2008 at 4:00 am
I I am so sorry guys!! I have been spending Christmas break at the Grandparents house who don’t have a computer then when we got home I was so busy with the homework I received form school, returning a few Christmas items, Going to friends houses, and just a few other priorities that this was at the bottom of my list! right now it is like 9:00 pm so I won’t be updating b4 I go 2 sleep but I promise if the teachers don’t load me with more long division or animal science I will most defiantly be updating! sometime this week tho there WILL be an update.
January 7th, 2008 at 4:16 pm
Cool! Cause if you don’t… *Grabs pitchfork*
January 7th, 2008 at 4:18 pm
Oh! And make sure you always have smilies in the title!
January 7th, 2008 at 11:29 pm
Alright Jells. I got pounded with homework 2! Chromosomes, 2 reading prjects a freakin’ huge Latin project, and scale models in Mathematics! HELP! *Is dragged away by pile f homework* AUGH! Noooooooo! JK!
January 7th, 2008 at 11:44 pm
UPDATED!!! (only a teeny tiny bit tho)
January 8th, 2008 at 12:53 am
I liked it! Good luck @ your concerto!
January 8th, 2008 at 4:25 pm
WOW! I like it! (as always)
P.S. I’m homeschooled. So I don’t get homework!
P.S.S. I had better not set this pitchfork down. *Looks at pitchfork in hand* I’m having to use it more and more lately.
January 8th, 2008 at 9:50 pm
January 9th, 2008 at 2:39 am
UPDATED AGAIN!!
January 9th, 2008 at 2:46 am
I know what the next chappy is going 2 b about so it shouldn’t take long.
January 9th, 2008 at 7:47 pm
I am upset on how I ended this story so I will start the sequel very soon. I hope tho that you the readers are not as disappointed.
January 9th, 2008 at 9:31 pm
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Let me be the first to say: Congratulations on a job well done!!!
January 9th, 2008 at 9:54 pm
Well, Jelly *sigh* I read the WHOLE story over again and I must say WELL DONE! Just a quick question tho: What happens to me? *cocks head to one side* And also, why does Sara need to B “wiped”? she IS part fairy after all!!! I will be waiting anxiously for the “not yet rated” sequel!
January 9th, 2008 at 11:34 pm
I am sorry ARTY’SELFFRIEND but your character will not crossover to the sequel. I would like it tho if u created a new villain! Sara needs to be wiped bcuz it is not noen if she is trustworthy.
January 11th, 2008 at 12:46 am
OH! I have a new chara…. she ain’t evil tho! Live with it! Her name is Jessika (That’s not a spelling mistake!). Where shall I put her blog?
January 12th, 2008 at 9:54 pm
OMG I LOVED IT!!! i stuck with you from the beginning, and i never stopped reading!!! Just wow!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!! remember me when you grow up and become a famous writer!!!!!!!!
January 13th, 2008 at 12:05 am
to Artyselfriend post it in “Extra’s”
January 15th, 2008 at 6:03 pm
Also remember me when you become famous!
But even after you become famous, still get on AF FanFiction.
January 19th, 2008 at 7:23 pm
I goot story. ig wuld b cul iv u dod un z-quel!
January 19th, 2008 at 8:32 pm
I did do a sequel. I is called ~back in Ireland~ it only has three chapters now making it less time consuming to read but I will update when I get more comments and ideas.
January 19th, 2008 at 9:21 pm
~Back in Ireland~ is good. But not as good as a week on the farm. I doubt that there will ever be another story as good as a Week on the Farm…
January 19th, 2008 at 9:46 pm
actually around chapter 6 it should get better. WAY better. I think by the end of ~Back in Ireland~ you will find A Week on the Farm is just a kick-off. But please continue to read a rate even if it doesn’t seem very good now. And if you want to be in the story now You can be just leave a description in “Extra’s”
January 20th, 2008 at 7:26 pm
I LOVED IT! I FINIALLY FINISHED , IM SORRY I TOOK LONG BUT IMN DONE AND NOW GOING TO READ BACK IN IRELAND!
January 20th, 2008 at 9:29 pm
It’s good but not really in my interest and holly by the way would not mesmer Artemis and Artemis would not act like that thank you very much
January 21st, 2008 at 12:06 am
idk I had to get him to a farm somehow and Artemis is only ooc depending what chapter you are on :shrug:
February 11th, 2008 at 2:20