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Netherworld 1.2

i love how arty looks in this one. hotness.

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Target Aquired   [Jun 09, 2008 at 08:33 AM]
Artemis does look hot in this, especially in the last panel. Nice shading, by the way.

I love the diolouge (I hope that's spelled right; I'm too lazy to spell-check!) on this page. It seems really natural and like something Colfer would write. The difference in Artemis' and Holly's rants says volumes about their personalities...

The only thing that looked a little off to me was the second panel when Holly whacked Artemis.. Artemis doesn't really look that affected by it. But it's still funny. XD
iesnoth   [Jun 09, 2008 at 09:19 AM]
he's not affected because he's sort of in shock b/c he has no idea what's going on, and he's probably used to holly hitting him by now. Laughing
thanks for the compliment. i can't say i try to write like colfer, but i do try to keep his characters true. i'm happy to know i'm doing well. Cool
Atremis_luvr#1   [Jun 24, 2008 at 06:33 PM]
you said 'the' instead of 'this' in the third panal, but that's not very noticable. At first Arty's expession while getting punched did look a little flat to me, but now that you've explained why, it makes sense and looks great! Cool
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